Aaron, this is fine, but maybe a little music or clipping some parts so there is not so much silences would make it a bit more entertaining. But you got the grammar points correct. Nice job. I asked you to please also add the text of your first pot and the edited post on this blog as well. Could you do that please?
So I can asses the differences! Let me know if you have any questions.
Aaron, this is fine, but maybe a little music or clipping some parts so there is not so much silences would make it a bit more entertaining. But you got the grammar points correct. Nice job. I asked you to please also add the text of your first pot and the edited post on this blog as well. Could you do that please?
ReplyDeleteSo I can asses the differences! Let me know if you have any questions.